Aglaiya ([info]aglaiya) wrote,
@ 2007-09-10 14:19:00
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Current mood: sad
Entry tags:rafa, slash



Losses

Title: Would you leave me?
Author: [info]aglaiya
Rating: R for words
Warning(s): non
Pairing: Rafael Marquez/Victor Valdes
Prompt: losses
Disclaimer: nothing is real, this happens only in my mind

Would you leave me?

Victor came to him with a bright smile on his face. "Let's go and have party. Only one or two hours."
Victor knew the place where they would meet the other mates. That meant loud music, alcohol and chicks.
Inside the club it was hot and loud and there were many people. Rafa found a place where he could watch all around.
Space was between Victor and him, to much space.
Rafa was drinking fast, too fast.
He watched a girl with short blond hair and a fancy black dress. She was looking interesting, what meant interesting for him. Rafa was searching the eye contact. The girl smiled back with her green eyes and opened her mouth slightly. Rafa's lips formed a soundless 'come to me'. Slowly the girl came to him. Ya, she was very pretty. She was exact his type. He started a trivial chat. The girl was smiling at him and answered with a soft voice in broken english.
He could scent her perfume. Delicious. He forgot his mates. He laid his arm around the girl and pulled her close to him. Too close to him. Her breath tickled his neck. Then he felt her lips, soft and tender. He wanted her. Right now. He whispered some words into her ear. She blushed and nodded.
Suddenly he felt eyes on himself. He turned and looked into Victor's eyes. Sadness.
He kissed the girl like a promise. "Wait a moment."
Then he went to Victor. When he went past him he said only three words: "Come with me."
Rafa left the club. Outside it was quiet and dark. He heard Victor's footsteps. He pulled Victor along. Some meters and he pushed him against the wall. His primed breath touched Victor's face. Victor turned away his face. But Rafa wanted to watch the reaction in Victor's eyes.
His voice was cynical: "What would you do if I would fuck that chick?"
Silence.
"Would you leave me?"
Silence.
"What would you do if I would fuck YOU right now?"
Silence.
"You have no answer?"
Silence.
"VICTOR!"
Then he heard hushed footsteps. The girl was searching him.
With bitterness in his boozed voice he whispered into Victor's ear: "Now I'll go and fuck that chick."
Rafa went to the girl.
Victor went into the darkness.


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[info]zimena
2007-09-10 12:53 pm UTC (link)
I've never seen fic-Rafa like this, but it suits him very well!
Very nice fic, and so angsty, too. Thanks for sharing.

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[info]aglaiya
2007-09-10 04:03 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for commenting *smile*

more about Rafa you can find here

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[info]defenda26addict
2007-09-10 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for posting *wait for more*. You know already what I think about *smile*.

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[info]aglaiya
2007-09-10 04:03 pm UTC (link)
Love you *smile*

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[info]defenda26addict
2007-09-10 04:17 pm UTC (link)
XD

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[info]pinguinolatino
2007-09-10 07:44 pm UTC (link)
Oh, intense! I liked it, very angsty. :)

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[info]aglaiya
2007-09-10 07:48 pm UTC (link)
thanks my sweety *smile*

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[info]ahkina
2007-09-10 11:27 pm UTC (link)
hey!!!
Can I public some pics of Cristiano Ronaldo at you community!!!!!

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[info]aglaiya
2007-09-11 11:32 am UTC (link)
You can do it... coz it's YOU! But you know I don't like him!

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[info]ahkina
2007-09-12 11:22 pm UTC (link)
OK! Then I don't put them... I like his body, but I don't like him...! hahahahaha...

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[info]aglaiya
2007-09-13 12:26 am UTC (link)
I know the pics... but still don't like him and his body...

But if you want, you can do it *smile*

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[info]paulii_oh_yesh
2008-04-09 04:42 pm UTC (link)
guh whoa! ok, i didnt expect that! very good, very angtsy :) i love it

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[info]aglaiya
2008-04-10 02:16 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for reading *huggels*

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